“A young author is tempted to leave anything he has written through fear of not having enough to say if he goes cutting out too freely. But it is easier to be long than short. Think of and look at your work as though it were done by your enemy. If you look at it to admire it you are lost. If we look at it to see where it is wrong, we shall see this and make it righter. If we look at it to see where it is right, we shall see this and not make it righter.”Samuel Butler
Critique is driven by a desire to figure out how to do something better.
Critique can be directed at ourselves (self-critique) or others. Critique can happen individually or in teams.
Critique is a complex human phenomenon.
At times critique can be messy, chaotic, and counterproductive. Critique can leave writers mute, feeling futile. Feedback can be destructive, a way of controlling and silencing others. Feedback can be contaminated by jealousy and Machiavellian power moves.
Sometimes feedback is only partially correct. Truth comes in shades of gray. Not all feedback is equal. Part of professionalism in the context of Writing Studies is not to be overly emotional about tough critiques. To progress as a writer, you need to separate have to learn to sort through critiques, reject some suggestions, and seriously consider other suggestions.
Some critiques are false or misleading. There are instances when you really do know better, when you should ignore a criticism. It’s not unusual for an audience (bosses, teachers, peers) to fail to understand you because they were rushed or preoccupied. And it could be true that the draft you shared was a bit too underdeveloped for your audience to see its potential or provide helpful critiques.
But often critiques are necessary. Writers rely on critique in order to improve their texts.
A young author is tempted to leave anything he has written through fear of not having enough to say if he goes cutting out too freely. But it is easier to be long than short. Think of and look at your work as though it were done by your enemy. If you look at it to admire it you are lost. If we look at it to see where it is wrong, we shall see this and make it righter. If we look at it to see where it is right, we shall see this and not make it righter.Samuel Butler
Being critiqued is never easy.
The thing is, as hard as that is to hear, sometimes that criticism is spot-on.
- Sometimes what we think is on the page isn’t really there. Especially when we know a topic well, it’s easy to wrongly assume we have provided all of the information our readers need to follow our reasoning.
- Sometimes we can be so emotionally embroiled in a topic that we may overlook weaknesses in our reasoning, information design, and information literacy, research, and/or style.
- Sometimes we don’t thoroughly account for the values, histories, education, and knowledge of our audience.
Aims of Critique
Feedback is deeply rhetorical. When used wisely, critique is sensitive to the rhetorical situation. For instance, critiques might consider how knowledgeable the rhetor is regarding the topic, whether the rhetor is in regards to developing the project (just beginning? midway? near completion). And the critique could certainly want to consider how open the rhetor is to critique. There’s no reason to give a critique hours of your time if it’s going to be ignored.
Two dominant aims of critique are (1) formative feedback, to coach writers to foster deeper learner and better writing and (2) summative feedback, to grade, sort, and rank order something, such as an essay.
- Formative Feedback is feedback given during a process that is intended to improve the final result. For example, a writing instructor might provide feedback on multiple drafts of a student’s project without grading. An extended example of formative feedback would be a portfolio of work. In some schools, students’ efforts on individual projects are not graded. Only the final portfolio is graded and that typically includes a reflection by the student about the portfolio.
- Summative Feedback is provided to grade, sort, and rank order something, such as an essay. In school settings a grade is an example of summative feedback. In business settings an example would be a funded grant proposal, a client’s acceptance of work for hire, or publication of an article. Summative critiques show up as grades in schools, stars on Uber rides, and thumbs up on website.
Benefits of Critique
Ray Dalio, a billionaire and Founder of Bridgewater Associates, a hedge fund, has written passionately about the importance of critique in workplace contexts.
Dalio believes businesses flounder when secret are kept. He believes in radical transparency–the notion that employees and employers should sand not used to inform decision making. In Principles: Life and Work Dalio argues business need to embrace meritocracies, where people are radical honesty and transparent about their assessments.
our dislike for conflict and the negative emotions we feel when we are critiqued cause us to avoid honesty self-appraisals and assessments of others. He argues
Benefits of Reciprocal Critiques
As a writer you can be especially confident in the authenticity of criticism and feedback when the same criticism comes from multiple reviewers. This is why it is common in workplace and academic contexts to provide critiques from multiple people.
Dangers of Critique
Critique can have a destructive influence on writers–particularly young people who are first learning how to write. Perhaps this is even more true for younger students who haven’t yet mastered the basics of composing, rhetoric, invention, revision, style, or editing
On occasion, people can be cruel and insensitive. Perhaps the writer struggled mightily and wrote countless drafts yet came at the document without a strong linguistic or literary background. Perhaps the writer had far less knowledge of the topic than the reader critic. Or perhaps the writer was learning a new genre and new research methods.
Aware of the emotionally charged nature of critique, writing teachers, instructors, and professors in higher-education institutions are sometimes timorous about providing real critique. Grade inflation and student evaluations have moved the grading curve in the humanities from a B to A range, especially for adjunct faculty, assistant professors, and non-tenured faculty. The result, as Garrison Keillor so aptly satirizes in the fictional community of Lake Wobegon, where “all the women are strong, all the men are good-looking, and all the children are above average.”
Yet the role of critique is even more complicated than all that. Why? Because sometimes the words on the page are more than the words on the page. Sometimes they reflect the lifeforce of the rhetor. Sometimes for the writer the words on the page are more than the words on a page. This phenomenon has been described by Compositionists as writer-based prose.
The idea behind writer-based prose is that the reviewer may not really know what the writer intended because of the ambiguities of his or her text. Sometimes the writer-based prose has amazing innovative potential that the would-be critic is simply not sophisticated enough to discern–they are yet just too damned nascent. Appropriating the student’s text–that is rewriting it as the reviewer would prefer it to be written–could be a destructive act. To help the writer’s original intention be realized, the reviewer may be better off just sharing to the rhetor how confusing he or she finds the text to be.
Genres of Critique
Some kinds of feedback are so routine that they can be described as a genre: “a method communities use (even if unconsciously) to sustain values, inculcate users, and communicate” (see Genre)
- Global Critique addresses substantive matters, the big picture. For instance, global critique could fault a composition for not being focused on the needs of an audience. (See Rhetoric for more on this.)
- Local Critique addresses style or editing style, or editing. This kind of feedback is often given as a side note (see below).
- The Side Note. Critics may write on a page or use a response tool to provide a comment to something said on a text. Typically, the side-note addresses a sentence, work, paragraph rather than the whole text. That said, teachers can provide side notes on a single topic throughout a text. This occurs, for instance, when an instructor wants a student to see a repeated error.
- Rubric-based feedback. instructors can click scores for Evidence, Organization, Format, and Style on a rubric.
- Endnotes. Critics may write a summative statement that An endnote that summarizes strengths and weaknesses or deviations from a rubric and genre expectations
- Line-by-Line Editing
Critics can rewrite your prose to illustrate recommended revisions and edits.
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